Sunday, May 10, 2015

Hail Mary

MAGPIE 269



Photograph courtesy Tess Kinkaid
http//magpietales.blogspot.com/



Hail Mary
Full of grace
They likened you
To a bubblehead

Hail Mary
The Lord is 
With thee, blessed
Those who understand

Holy Mary
Mother of God
Pray  for those
Who are blind

Mother Mary
Pray, forgive them
They know not
What they do 

Oh tender Mary
Those begging intercession
Were never left
Unaided and bereft

Lady of Nations
Queen of Heaven
I beg you
Ignore the headset

Filled with confidence
I approach you
To pray for
Them, me, Amen.


Barbara M Lake ©
May 2015 
Trinidad WI







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28 comments:

  1. CharleenMay 10, 2015 at 10:18 PM

    This is beautiful. Very nice.

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  2. GailMay 10, 2015 at 11:42 PM

    I think you wrote a beautiful piece.

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  3. ekta khetanMay 11, 2015 at 2:13 AM

    You wrote beautifully

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  4. JBinford-BellMay 11, 2015 at 5:41 AM

    The updated rosary for modern times? Nicely done.

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  5. KutamunMay 11, 2015 at 9:05 AM

    Stella Maris and her ghetto blaster !

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  6. Annie JeffriesMay 11, 2015 at 10:50 AM

    Blessed Mother, Queen of the Heavens.

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  7. HelenMay 11, 2015 at 11:03 AM

    I had a feeling you would head in this direction ~ so glad you did. Take care.

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    1. The Blog of BeeMay 13, 2015 at 11:53 AM

      Thank you Helen. When I saw it I wasn't sure but then I knew what I had to do!!

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  8. Tess KincaidMay 11, 2015 at 12:12 PM

    Hip and edgy and light...I like...

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  9. AnonymousMay 11, 2015 at 1:19 PM

    beautiful faith!

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  10. brudbergMay 12, 2015 at 12:43 AM

    There's a reason we need to move our prayers with time.

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  11. The Blog of BeeMay 13, 2015 at 11:56 AM

    Thank you everyone for coming here and taking the time to read and comment.

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  12. jabblogMay 13, 2015 at 4:57 PM

    A very nice update of a Catholic prayer (as I understand it). Beautiful:-)

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    1. The Blog of BeeMay 14, 2015 at 7:22 PM

      Thank you jabblog we need updates occasionally!.

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  13. TheRustGeekMay 13, 2015 at 5:06 PM

    Reimagining the Hail Mary? :) Nicely done...

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    1. The Blog of BeeMay 14, 2015 at 3:17 PM

      Thank you. I am sure she won't mind! There's a bit of The Memorare in there too!

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  14. i b aroraMay 18, 2015 at 12:17 AM

    what ever comes from within is a prayer, nicely written

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