Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Stuck!

Mag 81 

 

  Photograph courtesy Tess Kinkaid, Magpie Tales


Old
Decrepit
Broken 
Surrounded by junk 
Bogged down
Stuck in a rut
A
Bit like life really!



Barbara M Lake ©  
September 2011
Trinidad, WI


16 comments:

  1. Concise. Sharp. And spot on. Good one, Bee!

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  2. Brilliant! Alot like life, if we don't get out of the muck.

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  3. Bee ... your Magpie reminds me of why I enjoy motion in my life!

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  4. Bee . . I think there is a typo in your URL in he Magpie Linkylist. You have "expatbeesblof" so the click returns "Blog Not Found" I guessed what was wrong . . . and found you. Perhaps you should link your entry again?

    I liked your interpretation of the prompt.

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  5. That's a fine description of many of us . . . !

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  6. "A bit like life really" couldn't agree more...
    Very well said:)

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  7. I think I am going to stop automatically linking my blogs here into notes in FB. I read yours there first and it smashed the format. Poetry needs format.

    Like this little poem lots. It says so much in so few words - and format.

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  8. oh can be so true
    great little magpie

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  9. You tell it like it is Bee....hope all is going well for you these days. :-)

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  10. Not TOO much like your life, Bee, I would hope?

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  11. yes and more and more of it all the time! ha ha
    Loved your sweet poem.

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  12. Thank you everyone. I am so sorry that I have not been able to get to everyone's page on this one - am still trying. It's been a hell of a few weeks with one thing and another and time is against me.

    No not my life - not all the time anyway!!

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  13. Thank you Jo and thank you for visiting.

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You are always welcome here . Thank you for visiting.

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