Spring, 1935 by Kuzma Petrov=-Vodin
Photograph courtesy Tess Kinkaid, Magpie Tales
He watches me too closely
Silently
Intensely
I wish I wasn't here
She sits there much too stiffly
Boardlike
Corrugated
I wish I hadn't asked her
Barbara M Lake ©
Trinidad WI
April 2013
How much fun is your poem? Tons!!!
ReplyDeleteInteresting take on the painting. Neither of them wanting to be there. Never thought of that possibility. Very imaginative.
ReplyDeleteI like that!
ReplyDeleteI love this, your choice of language is perfect =)
ReplyDeleteA perfect reading of the painting.
ReplyDeleteGood one. I like that you included both views.
ReplyDeleteWe've all been there! Nice take.
ReplyDeleteHad to chuckle. We probably all can recall at least one bad date just like that. Well done, Bee.
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