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Pointy toes almost touching
One another
Hands in pockets
Nonchalant intimacy
For all to see
Misty morning raindrops
Like crystals
Landing on lashes
Brushing cheeks
Like butterfly wings
This day is dawning
Inevitable delay
In saying goodbye
Heavenly tears
Dans le parapluie pris
Barbara M Lake ©
Trinidad 2012
October 2012
I am reminded of
So much more romantic than mine.
ReplyDeleteAh but yours had a great twist
DeleteNonchalant intimacy...love.
ReplyDeleteLovely, Bee. Very romantic. The lovers are very comfortable with each other. The words are rooted in intimacy.
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteWell done. Reminded me of the Cherbourg film too.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I haven;t been able to get the tune out of my head since I saw the picture!
DeleteHow very perfect this is!
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteBee, this is an awesome poem ... the first stanza just blew me away. Happy weekend!!!
ReplyDeleteYou're very kind - thank you. Hope your weekend is being kind to you.
Delete'Parting is such sweet sorrow'
ReplyDeleteIndeed it is! Thanks for visiting
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