Monday, April 25, 2011

Lament of Butter Fingers

MAGPIE 63

Photograph courtesy of  Tess Kinkaid, Magpie Tales

I cry tears of
Frustration
Disappointment
And despair
Unable to stop
Reds blues greens
And yellows
Shooting up into the air

In uncontrollable 
Excitement
Impatience
 And dire thirst
I made a total hash
Of opening
My bag of
GummiBurst

Barbara M Lake ©
Trinidad
April 2011



25 comments:

  1. Such a fun Magpie, now, that gave me a chuckle!!

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  2. This made me laugh out loud:-)

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  3. Delightful fun.....love this Bee!!

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  4. LOL...I go for the chocolate myself...

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  5. Heartfelt smiles... perfectly delicious piece.

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  6. Haha! I hate it when that happens =-) Delicious take!

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  7. mouth-watering sweet!
    thank you for the smile

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  8. The Gummi Bursts deserve this tribute!!

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  9. The surprise was definitely at the end!

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  10. Yes, I hope you enjoy everyone of them...bkm

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  11. My goodness ... such fun! (I must admit the very first thought that came to my mind was 'starburst' candies) You knocked this out of the ballpark.

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  12. Brilliant! This brought a smile to my face.

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  13. Superb. Thanks for the chuckle!

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  14. Love this! At first I thought that it was going to be sad and then you surprised us with the gummy candy! Niiiiiccccceeee! :o)

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  15. oh hahah! so funny clever you!

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  16. Oh, I can identify with this, Bee, having a mouth full of sweet teeth! :-)

    I have started a new Photoblog that you may enjoy looking at:

    http://nixpages.blogspot.com/

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  17. Oh the frustration when the damn bag wont open! Made me smile too!

    Anna :o]

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  18. I wasn't expecting the second stanza...thanks so much for the laugh! I love it!

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  19. I made a total hash
    Of opening
    My bag of
    GummiBurst

    Funny stuff! Love it!

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  21. Thank you so much everyone - glad you thought it was fun - I had fun putting it together.

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