Sunday, May 10, 2015

Hail Mary

MAGPIE 269



Photograph courtesy Tess Kinkaid
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Hail Mary
Full of grace
They likened you
To a bubblehead

Hail Mary
The Lord is 
With thee, blessed
Those who understand

Holy Mary
Mother of God
Pray  for those
Who are blind

Mother Mary
Pray, forgive them
They know not
What they do 

Oh tender Mary
Those begging intercession
Were never left
Unaided and bereft

Lady of Nations
Queen of Heaven
I beg you
Ignore the headset

Filled with confidence
I approach you
To pray for
Them, me, Amen.


Barbara M Lake ©
May 2015 
Trinidad WI







28 comments:

  1. This is beautiful. Very nice.

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  2. I think you wrote a beautiful piece.

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    1. Thank you, I wasn't sure about it as you know.

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  3. The updated rosary for modern times? Nicely done.

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  4. Stella Maris and her ghetto blaster !

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    1. Star of the Sea - I hope she prays for me!

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  5. Blessed Mother, Queen of the Heavens.

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  6. I had a feeling you would head in this direction ~ so glad you did. Take care.

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    1. Thank you Helen. When I saw it I wasn't sure but then I knew what I had to do!!

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  7. Hip and edgy and light...I like...

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  8. There's a reason we need to move our prayers with time.

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  9. Thank you everyone for coming here and taking the time to read and comment.

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  10. A very nice update of a Catholic prayer (as I understand it). Beautiful:-)

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    1. Thank you jabblog we need updates occasionally!.

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  11. Reimagining the Hail Mary? :) Nicely done...

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    1. Thank you. I am sure she won't mind! There's a bit of The Memorare in there too!

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  12. what ever comes from within is a prayer, nicely written

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