Sunday, January 6, 2013

The Deception

MAGPIE 150


Image Daniel Murtagh
Tess Kinkaid Magpie Tales

She watches closely
Waiting to see
What happens
When the damage
She has done
Creates havoc

She waits patiently
In the wings
Knowing that
He will come
When his love
Has had enough

She will console
Hold his hand
Comforting words
To soothe him
Knowing she had
Planned it all




Barbara M Lake  ©
January 2013
Trinidad WI







20 comments:

  1. I love a weel designed plan.
    rel

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  2. Intriguing .. not certain whether she is the wife or the other woman ~~ could go either way.

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  3. yow- I've known women like this- like Black Widow spiders they are treacherous and poisonous...well done!

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  4. Manipulation and malice make for a great poem. I want to know more of this story.

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  5. She is up to no good. I've been staring at her trying to put together something but I gather I've been seeing her in the wrong light. Perhaps I can spin something now.

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  6. So much to this piece--it can spin out in so many directions! Lovely write!

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  7. Wow! this is a trailer for what MUST be a nail-biting movie!! ;)

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  8. The mystery deepens. I want to know more!

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  9. That was such a good twist to the picture. Don't we just love the cunning and manipulative strong women?

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  10. She has that just that sort of look on her face - well thought out.

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  11. She does look deceitful...well captured
    Hugs
    SueAnn

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  12. Clever write of a cunning woman - she does look a little devious.

    Anna :o]

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  13. Very clever and so full of feeling , Bee, thanks

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  14. Thank you to all. Love your comments which as always are very much appreciated. Sadly I based this on the very recent experience of someone I`m close to. By very recent I mean last Saturday! Dreadful!

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  15. this leaves me wondering!!!!!!!!!!! worst than LOST. teehee

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  16. She weaves such a web, yes. Well done

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