I love the use of line breaks, and the last three lines were totally savored.
sing it, Peggy Lee :)
Yes...this is all there is...& 4 all those who don't like it, u don't have 2 stay.
That would be all of it... nicely done.
Reflection, here, on a number of levels. Nice.
October 20, 2010 6:45 PM Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said... sing it, Peggy Lee :)I can see why you would think soIs that all there isIs that all there isIf that's all there is my friendThen let's keep dancingBring out the boozeAnd have a ballIf that's all there is
I really enjoyed reading this. Such a powerful and poignant piece. Nice Magpie. My Magpie
I agree. Very poignant. BTW I have really appreciated all your comment as of late. Soudns like you went through massive loss too. I;d b eintersted learning more at some point. Anyway, thanks again for your rncouragement.
elegant,love the creative part in your writing.
Lemme know when you're ready for your not-so-literary-agent :D
nice. only a reflection....you stir much in this short verse...
Simplicity at it's best ... thought evoking piece. Nice Magpie!
Bee, this is such a different take on the prompt.. I vote this the best.. xx
Thank you all so very much - I really am totally blown away as I don't see myself as being a poet. I used to write when I was younger and now only very occasionally do I dare to.So many words of encouragement here - thank you again for reading, liking and for your generosity.
A first rate response to the prompt. Succinct and refreshing.
Thank you so much Dave.
It doesn't look much but your words have given it a character and meaning. CJ xx
You can read things into this.. Powerful.Thanks for stopping by and introducing yourself to me...Wysteria
Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender
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Thank you all so much for visiting and giving me the incentive to continue.Jingle - I will try! Thank you.
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