tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post918462191442106875..comments2023-12-21T14:13:00.537-04:00Comments on The Blog of Bee: Just a HouseThe Blog of Beehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00650938872732748697noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-43197609885021286632011-02-18T10:13:09.449-04:002011-02-18T10:13:09.449-04:00Greetings, how are you?
Write a free verse 4 Poets...Greetings, how are you?<br /><a href="http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!</a><br /><br /> Hope to see you in,<br /><br />Love your poetry talent and looking forward a profound experience with your input.<br /><br />Cheers.<br />xoxoxHyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-52555366186543838402011-02-16T17:07:52.149-04:002011-02-16T17:07:52.149-04:00Thank you Paul - nice to see you hereThank you Paul - nice to see you hereThe Blog of Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650938872732748697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-66755956686137911952011-02-15T18:33:50.121-04:002011-02-15T18:33:50.121-04:00You express so well the thoughts that go through p...You express so well the thoughts that go through people's minds with the houses that we pass.Paul Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01836602667355512504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-8524342984467408932011-02-14T17:25:44.186-04:002011-02-14T17:25:44.186-04:00Thank you all so much for coming to see me.
Rel y...Thank you all so much for coming to see me.<br /><br />Rel you're right - a lonely house is just that - a house<br /><br />kavisionz - there is always hope<br /><br />Ah yes Helen......<br /><br />I hoped to get it right Lissa<br /><br />tumblewords - I really couldn't leave it empty as it's such a nice looking house<br /><br />Dr I wanted the twist at the end but I do see your point - thanks for your contribution - always open to suggestion<br /><br />Jacqui - always hope but see above<br /><br />Yes thingy that's what I wanted you to see<br /><br />Sounds like a plan Lena!<br /><br />Strummed words - glad you liked it - I wanted the positive ending<br /><br />girldaydreaming you give me hope!<br /><br />Jingle I wanted to create an atmosphere of desolation<br /><br />Madame - me too - books and music - lots of nooks and lots of music<br /><br />mamacheetah - I'm glad you caught the coldness<br /><br />Judy - you're an ace<br /><br />Suko you too give me hope!<br /><br />Really Susannah? Wow that's brave of you! Nice to know that you enjoyed it<br /><br />Again, thanks everyone. Much appreciated.The Blog of Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650938872732748697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-28874158962709158992011-02-14T09:13:44.634-04:002011-02-14T09:13:44.634-04:00I enjoyed this very much, a great one to read alou...I enjoyed this very much, a great one to read aloud (I did!):-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-90958924439125991182011-02-14T00:41:52.691-04:002011-02-14T00:41:52.691-04:00Your words are crisp and this piece flows well. Lo...Your words are crisp and this piece flows well. Lovely poem!Sukohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11893742747135555499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-35512904676045811302011-02-13T23:24:13.818-04:002011-02-13T23:24:13.818-04:00What a great piece on this prompt. The house seem...What a great piece on this prompt. The house seems so cold and I feel the feelings you expressed here. Well done!Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-18595174255084073962011-02-13T19:46:27.837-04:002011-02-13T19:46:27.837-04:00Now I'm curious what it's like in the summ...Now I'm curious what it's like in the summer. Lovely images of a deserted home. I especially liked the 4th stanza. I could feel the cold and emptiness inside.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-52549982143609306142011-02-13T18:10:54.908-04:002011-02-13T18:10:54.908-04:00Looks like the sort of house I'd like to buy a...Looks like the sort of house I'd like to buy and fill with books. Lovely words and so glad that there's a positive ending!Madame DeFargehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08172239340844485940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-53131968410665925482011-02-13T14:20:09.038-04:002011-02-13T14:20:09.038-04:00a deserted home, haunting.
well penned magpie.
Ha...a deserted home, haunting.<br /><br />well penned magpie.<br />Happy Sunday!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-20935430603865822782011-02-13T00:10:27.271-04:002011-02-13T00:10:27.271-04:00lovely! alone... only for a moment in time... beau...lovely! alone... only for a moment in time... beautiful poem.girl daydreaminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752976412833155762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-3956659486819307572011-02-12T03:31:44.294-04:002011-02-12T03:31:44.294-04:00Nice positie ending! Love the cadence in your poem...Nice positie ending! Love the cadence in your poem.Strummed Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14345074413602549369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-1555559510760101062011-02-11T10:24:51.568-04:002011-02-11T10:24:51.568-04:00Aaaaahh! Glad to know that spring brings life back...Aaaaahh! Glad to know that spring brings life back to him! I'd love to spend time alone there, away from the boys.....just me, housey and his chimney!!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-42504222846312988582011-02-11T10:14:23.399-04:002011-02-11T10:14:23.399-04:00Oh, interesting. I can see an elderly couple takin...Oh, interesting. I can see an elderly couple taking off for warmer climes.<br /><br />Yeah, I liked the end, too. Hopeful, waiting home.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-48521527607086694042011-02-11T08:02:42.367-04:002011-02-11T08:02:42.367-04:00Oh, but the last stanza is hope. Maybe just the ho...Oh, but the last stanza is hope. Maybe just the hope of a lonely house.JBinford-Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14293248281473648182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-65716043070835664392011-02-11T06:55:48.133-04:002011-02-11T06:55:48.133-04:00It is a nice twist at the end . . . but (and I'...It is a nice twist at the end . . . but (and I'm sorry to say this) - I think your last stanza blows away the beautiful melancholy mood you worked so well to create in the first stanzas of the poem.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-63476901601710842262011-02-11T01:42:10.262-04:002011-02-11T01:42:10.262-04:00Nice twist at the end! They need a house-sitter, d...Nice twist at the end! They need a house-sitter, don't they?Deborahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12002468510668438210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-55252571906682928182011-02-11T00:18:00.264-04:002011-02-11T00:18:00.264-04:00Glad to hear the nest isn't forever empty! Nic...Glad to hear the nest isn't forever empty! Nice piece!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-72693491084818128712011-02-10T23:41:23.811-04:002011-02-10T23:41:23.811-04:00a mix of words that sounds just righta mix of words that sounds just rightlissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11012085842881252635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-46169475324335897682011-02-10T20:31:46.685-04:002011-02-10T20:31:46.685-04:00Ah, the tale of the snowbirds!Ah, the tale of the snowbirds!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-44483566638340822532011-02-10T20:27:04.070-04:002011-02-10T20:27:04.070-04:00Ohhh... I feel for this house... I wonder what its...Ohhh... I feel for this house... I wonder what its story is... (sigh)<br />And I certainly hope that Spring breathes some life into it... <br /><br />What a lovely read, B.. Sad, but ending with a glint of hope...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4890866550699482561.post-33398928223838875632011-02-10T17:18:53.301-04:002011-02-10T17:18:53.301-04:00Bee,
There's nothing lonlier than an empty hou...Bee,<br />There's nothing lonlier than an empty house.<br />relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.com